small edits to changelog

ChangeLog

@@ -3,15 +3,13 @@ Changes in version 0.3.2.4-alpha - 2017-11-08
   It fixes several bugs introduced in earlier releases, including
   stability and reliability fixes on earlier versions of Tor.
 
-  o Major bugfixes (Exit nodes):
+  o Major bugfixes (exit nodes, DNS):
-    - Fix an issue causing high-bandwidth exit nodes to fail a majority
+    - Fix an issue causing DNS to fail on high-bandwidth exit nodes,
-      or all of their DNS requests, making them basically unsuitable for
+      making them enarly unusable for regular. Fixes bugs 21394 and
-      regular usage in Tor circuits. The problem is related to
+      18580; bugfix on 0.1.2.2-alpha, which introduced eventdns. Thanks
-      libevent's DNS handling, but we can work around it in Tor. Fixes
+      to Dhalgren for identifying and finding a workaround to this bug
-      bugs 21394 and 18580; bugfix on 0.1.2.2-alpha which introduced
+      and to Moritz, Arthur Edelstein and Roger for helping to track it
-      eventdns. Credit goes to Dhalgren for identifying and finding a
+      down and analyze it.
-      workaround to this bug and to gamambel, arthuredelstein and arma
-      in helping to track it down and analyze it.
 
   o Minor features (logging, scheduler):
     - Introduce a SCHED_BUG() function to log extra information about
@@ -22,7 +20,7 @@ Changes in version 0.3.2.4-alpha - 2017-11-08
     - The ClientDNSRejectInternalAddresses flag can once again be set in
       non-testing Tor networks, so long as they do not use the default
       directory authorities. This change also removes the deprecation of
-      this flag in 0.2.9.2-alpha. Closes ticket 21031.
+      this flag from 0.2.9.2-alpha. Closes ticket 21031.
 
   o Minor features (testing):
     - Our fuzzing tests now test the encrypted portions of the v3 hidden
@@ -42,15 +40,15 @@ Changes in version 0.3.2.4-alpha - 2017-11-08
       on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (logging, relay):
-    - Downgrade a warning to a protocol warning in the case the ed25519
+    - Give only a protocol warning when the ed25519 key is not
-      key is not consistent between the descriptor and micro descriptor
+      consistent between the descriptor and micro descriptor of a relay.
-      of a relay. This can happen for instance if the relay has been
+      This can happen, for instance, if the relay has been flagged
-      flagged NoEdConsensus. Fixes bug 24025; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
+      NoEdConsensus. Fixes bug 24025; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (manpage, hidden service):
-    - Mention that the HiddenServiceNumIntroductionPoints option is 0-10
+    - Document that the HiddenServiceNumIntroductionPoints option is
-      for v2 service and 0-20 for v3 service. Fixes bug 24115; bugfix
+      0-10 for v2 service and 0-20 for v3 service. Fixes bug 24115;
-      on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
+      bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (memory leak):
     - Fix a minor memory-leak-at-exit in the KIST scheduler. This bug
@@ -64,9 +62,8 @@ Changes in version 0.3.2.4-alpha - 2017-11-08
     - Cache some needed onion service client information instead of
       continuously computing it over and over again. Fixes bug 23623;
       bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
-    - Properly retry HSv3 descriptor fetches in the case where we were
+    - Properly retry HSv3 descriptor fetches when missing required
-      initially missing required directory information. Fixes bug 23762;
+      directory information. Fixes bug 23762; bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
-      bugfix on 0.3.2.1-alpha.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (relay, crash):
     - Avoid a crash when transitioning from client mode to bridge mode.